Transitions: Scripting

'Where's my money? Script' Scripting the piece was fairly straight forward as we didn't need to change or want to change any of the dialogue. Changing dialogue could risk losing the shows tone and humour if it isn't done right and it's not a skillset either of us particularly wanted to practice. The stages to this process were fairly straight forward; we would have the same dialogue but change the scene directions around accordingly. However, there was no copy of the script online so myself and Jack listened to the scene over and wrote one scene each.

This meant the process was more lengthy, but did mean I know every single detail of the script, which is good to know when directing. I wanted my scenes to flow well together so the whole sequence doesn't look scattered. However, the best way we found of doing this was to put the scene out of their chronological order which sounds buzzer. However, the scenes are a couple of episodes apart so having the hotel scene first would make it better for when they get taken as hostages (which is seen in an earlier episode). I knew that directing the hotel scene would be difficult on my budget as would the scrap yard, so finding ways around this was something we needed to plan in the early stages of scriptwriting. I want to end on Sam getting dragged away; this would also be a good cliff hanger.


'Where's my money? Script'




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